Nothing that it was before it is no more
there was something here yet there was nothing here
I miss spending days in nothing making fun outta something
Old summers past but not at last but as if strippen from me with my last gasp
I'm siting here without you where you never were
I miss you like I miss sweet nothings because we truly had something
you are not living but to me you are not dead
not hearing you out loud for words you cannot say
hearing them inside my head til near the end of day
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your poem has a lot of emotions in it, its a poem a lot of people could relate to. Its a great poem.
W0W.... THAT WAS A G00D P0EM. iT KiNDA HAD D0UBLE MEANiNGS. i DiDNT REALLY KN0W WhAT Y0U WERE TALKiN AB0UT BUT THAT WAS A G00D THiNG BECAUSE THEN i CAN RELATE iT T0 MY 0WN LiFE. G00D j0B BUddY.
i like it...i like how there is something to read but yet there is nothing... hahaha...but i like how it catches the reader to want to read more cause it is "CRAZY"!! but yeah... NICE JOB!!!
i also like your poem it seemed like it took you a while to come up with it. you did a tremendous job
Nice poem charile.. its deep ... nice job dude!
I like the emotions that you convey in your poem. Be careful with the line breaking. Good job!
your poem is awesome man!! You've got...Emotions in your poem dude!!
Your poem is awesome. Its has lots of emotion in it and many people could relate. Good job!!
That was beautiful.
it was so emotional (the only word i could think of)
The title deffanitly grabs the reader because of "crazy" very good.
great poem, but you need to make your mind up on rhyming or not.
good job. you cold break it up a little more. but good work
"you are not living but to me you are not dead" This is a great line. It is very powerful. Good job, Charlie.
i like your poem, its really deep. but you did a good job, its nice and short, but when you read it you get a lot out of it. great job.
it's good you use more details describing something that has to do with woods this way it will make more sense to people. Yeah it's kinda crazy you're talking about the woods but it's also unique.
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