Thursday, October 11, 2007

55 word final

The house
My house
Not anymore
It was late
It was dark
We opened the door
A paper fell
I picked it up
Went to my room
Then plugged in the light to read
I never should have
I read
"Foreclosure"
"Up for auction"
"Hennepin county sheriff’s office"
I had hope
I never should have

55 word #2 not 55 words though hmmm

The house
My house
Not anymore
It was late
It was dark
I opened the door
A paper fell
I picked up the paper
I walked to my room
I turned on the light to read
I never should have
I read
"Foreclosure"
"Up for auction"
"Hennepin county sheriff’s office"

55 word #1

The house
My house
Not anymore
It was late
It was dark
We opened the door
It fell
I picked the paper up
I walked to my room
Turned on the light to read
I never should have
I read
"foreclosure"
"up for auction"
"Hennepin county sheriffs office"
She was there
She always will be